查看完整版本: 【平妖传】第二十七回、第二十八回（两回双飞）

还是喜欢古典仙侠类的文章
作者写的很有仙剑的风范...记得很久以前看过一个改编的仙剑版本...写的很好 可惜没能结尾
写长篇本身就很需要勇气...希望作者能够再接再厉吧  支持下辛勤劳动

刚看到题目的双飞还以为是剧情里的情节呢。
看来明璇在之前就定给明朗了。后面显然要换掉的。

与妖刀风格相似，不过细节描写之处更有胜者，还是很用心在写啊。

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文章对苏绣的描写很出彩，文笔真是越加精妙啊，非常的喜欢啊

一月未更，是否已太监？常常上来查看，乘兴而来，败兴而返:cry

回复 108楼 的帖子

色文作者没有报酬，只是凭着爱好来写作。但是现实却是，生活中会不停的需要费用支出。这就决定了色文作者不可能像起点那些人一样，每天更个三五千字，一月不更甚至更长时间也属正常。个人认为，如果真的喜欢文、喜欢作者，只需用心回复便是支持，而后耐心等待。相信将心比心，作者也会看到我等读者的迫切。一句话伤人心，远比刀子厉害许多。仅仅一个月的时间，你上来就说作者是否太监，换做你是作者，你作何感想？山神家中有事，短期不能更新，蛇大早已说明，我虽然日夜期盼，但也只能遥祝山神一切遂心，早早回来续文。每天来刷新，看看会不会有惊喜出现。看到平妖被顶上来，本来心里欢喜，谁知进来却看到这么一句回复，真是怒从心头起！！！！:huffy

坚决支持109楼！！！
很多好文章就是被那些不知所谓的人胡说八道说断的！
权利和义务是统一的，没有认真履行好一个读者义务的人，
有什么资格强求作者，你有付出了什么？
能够读到平妖，是千山给大家的一份重礼，一份惊喜，
无论多久都是可以理解的，你能要求别人什么时候送礼送什么礼？
话说我等逍遥多年，仍然心怀希望，
虽然暂时读不到，但回味前文，还是对迷大心存感激
对于平妖这样一部大作，我们应该珍惜，
对于带给我们惊喜的千山，我们应该信任，而不是怀疑！！！
文人的心都是很敏感的，越是杰出越是如此！
最后，祝愿千山一切顺利~~~~~~

平妖传确实是最近跟的很紧的一篇文啊，非常期待两兄弟之间的绿帽情节啊。不过，云炫同志首先要在无忧境扩大自己的后宫才行啊。祝千山大大万事顺意啊。

前几天开始看平妖传，感觉千山的写作功底真的很强，这种感觉也就是在看管潮平的仙路烟尘，树下野狐的搜神记的时候出现过。
文笔上来说我最是喜欢这种感觉，文笔优美，感情细腻，H文写的也是像是恋人间的感觉一样，仿佛纯爱一样，我个人非常喜欢。
情节上，前面的暂时不说，这一段，非常有红楼梦的感觉，尤其是前面见奶奶（外婆！）那段，就像是林妹妹初进大观园一摸一样，然后温馨中带点小幽默。
另外就是伏笔，君舆表白那段，想起来如果真的成功，那后面估计就得悲剧，因为那个新的守宫砂是对外人才失效的，而他跟袁夜来是同一个人，如果真的两个人在一起，肯定会发现当初那个事实，可怜的君舆啊！

云炫和苏绣的故事情节很吸引人，看着很令人热血沸腾啊
但师兄君舆的情节更吸引我，无限期待增加师兄君舆的戏份
还有期待作者更新啊，苦苦的等待啊

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呵呵，云炫终于有了第一个处女了呢。
苏绣算是丫鬟替床啦，接下来不知会是明璇和明珰哪位明小姐归依云炫的胯下。
嗯，其实还是很惦记君舆和他的恶身呢。

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苏绣的写做真是令人越看越想看，越读越想读，把事都写活了。

苏绣的归附太重要了，读心术所向披靡！只要苏绣真心相助，无忧境众女的心思都被云炫了若指掌，何愁收复明氏双株！好期待明璇的肉戏啊，传说中的仙女！祝千山大大灵感如泉涌，下笔如有神！

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一口气读完意犹未尽，只是苦等结局不是我辈作风！！
忘作者能再接再厉，争取早日完本！

每次打开电脑，就像跟老朋友有约似的一定要打开这篇文章重温一遍。如此经典的修仙文，这么久了，一直未有更新，让人非常牵挂。

:excellence :excellence 觉得现在写这种古典气息的色文的很少了，支持下。。。

两个月过去，这双飞的都飞累了。麽是要太监了吧。那就真要泪奔了